A Second Coming
Uncounted steps passed beneath the young knight’s feet.
He climbed, head bowed to the shining marble steps. Rainbow flecks played over his curly hair and ivory cloak, shed by ascending stained glass arches. His spurs clicked with every step. His lips shifted, parted in a breathless chant:
Laudate Avetha, Deus in terra,Avetha, gratia plena,
Avetha, potesta plena,
Ave, ave, Dominosa,
Dominosa autem mecum esta.
A hundred steps further, he stopped, leaned heavily beside a window arch. His plumed helm rose and fell, tucked against his heaving breastplate. With a handful of white silk cloak, he wiped his brow. Panting, he peered through a semi-opaque pane.
Some half a league below, a military procession of immense scale crept down the cypress-lined promenade. Thousands of red pennants snapped over the pointed helms of soldiers, whipped by autumn breeze. Thousands of brass-shod boots crashed in unison over old-city pavers and dried leaves.
It was an opulence of militaria and faith combined: Black oxide gunsprings, parade bright, tucked smartly to uniform breasts blazoned with the seven-pointed spear over the seven-pinnacled crown of Empire. ¶ Prelates, in their breastplates and crimson stoles, bearing huge gisarmes dangling with censers shedding myrrh and labdanum. Priests of the Refective Order in carriages passed knotted holiday loaves rich with spices and nuts to young hastati, who ferried them to the beaming public.
At the procession’s head rode gleaming knights. Each bestride a monstrous destrier, clad in laminated, whirring clockwork steel layered with crimson capes and sashes of office. The roiling crowd, waving and cheering, loved these riders most of all. Sweet roses thrown by the masses crushed under high-stepping hooves and steelshod boots. From such a height, the thunder of their steps and accompanying drums was a low roar.
The knight’s gaze followed those riders, watched the stellate spears emblazoned on their ceremonial shields: the symbol on his own cape.
He sighed.
With a start, he resumed his climb. Again, he chanted, filled the helical stair with repeated bars of prayer and the rhythmic click of metal boots. A vein pulsed above his eye. He churned on, sorely belted his prayer through gritted teeth. When at last the stair ended, he nearly toppled, expecting another step.
Before him was a high, small room. Vaulted and airy. Through the right wall was set a deep window, its panes uncolored and drooping in their leading. The old glass was covered by thin bars of new, dark steel, anchored to the wall. Through these fell a shaft of light, bathing the small marble altar in the room’s center. Past this hung a curtain emblazoned with the star-headed spear.
Clumsy from the climb, the knight dropped sharply to kneel before the altar. His helmet clunked to the dusty marble floor. He swallowed, bowed his head, clasped his uneasy hands.
“Avetha,” he recited, hoarsely. “Sister Lord, forgive my trespass: I have broached Altamora to commit myself to thee. I am a chevalier newly made. Accept me now as you did the palatines of old. Laudate Aveth, Deus in terra...”
Glittering dust fell as he prayed, cut into a grid by the window bars. Square lines of shadow patterned the altar and the man’s white cloak.
Cloth rustled. A shadow passed over the altar. The knight’s head jerked up. A dark-haired girl had emerged from behind the curtain. She was barefoot, and wore the long-sleeved robe of an altar attendant, a neophyte. She fixed the knight with a curious gaze. “Who are you?” she said, quiet.
“Sister, I am Edwind Melvyno Kréc de Carro,” said the knight, standing hurriedly. “Sent to bid my troth as a chevalier to the Lord.”
The neophyte stepped forward. “It has been a thousand years and more since a holy soldier was sworn under Her name.” She said it with weight, playing on the significance.
“Her return,” said Kréc. “Is a high miracle. I am honored to be the first.”
“Do you think Aveth will accept you, Sir Kréc? After all this time?”
Krec’s brow fluttered, pinched. “It is my dearest wish that she would,” said he. He clenched a metal fist over his heart. The metal creaked.
“Why would she?”
“I have devoted my life to humanity. By Her grace and strength, I have trained to fight the enemies of Man for my whole life. For her.”
She blinked. “And what will your Lord do, if she accepts you?”
Krec blinked at her, quizzical. “She will take my hand and provide me a gift of wisdom, as she gave to the palatines of old.” He squared his shoulders and frowned. “Who are you to ask?”
The girl smiled. “Forgive my prying.” She lifted a hand at the window well. “Wait with me here, Sir Kréc. You will meet your Lord soon.”
Together, they went to the sill, sat in its deep recess. Kréc settled, his armor clacking on the steel bars. The girl settled, legs tucked to the stone, back against the arching well. Pale light illuminated half her face. She peered at him. Kréc stared, brow knitted, at their shadows imposed over the small alter. They sat a moment in silence.
“Have you met the Lord?” Kréc said sharply, voice suddenly hoarse.
“I have.”
Kréc’s eyes were bright, anxious. “Is she as the priests say?” he asked, thickly.
The girl cocked her head, curious. “Maybe. How do they describe her?”
“I...” said the Knight, trailing. He looked again at the altar. “I find I no longer remember what they say. I have only my own mind’s portrait.” He looked at her, smiled wryly. “The image of my Lord is mine only, I suppose.”
“Describe her yourself, then.”
Kréc shut his eyes, tipped his head to the vaulted roof. “She is like a wise older sister. I speak to her, and know I will receive praise or criticism as I deserve. Either way, it’s her interest to guide me. She is loving.” He shifted. “Her presence is larger than she is, and her gaze humbles even the proudest man. She has eyes like green garnets, as the monks painted her in the frescoes of Bansa Abbey,” he said, turning. “Like yours.”
The girl smiled at him. “When do you see her?”
“When I pray,” said the knight, immediately. “I have prayed to the Lord every day since I first learned how.” He frowned, considered how their crisscrossed shadows fell across the altar.
“It is odd,” he said. “I am only now about to meet the Lord, but I feel as though I’ve known her all my life.”
At this, they sat in silence. The girl hooked a pair of fingers over the window bars, peered over and far away. “Do you know, Sir knight...” she said. Her voice was stronger than before, deeper.
“At night, far away, I can see fires on the hilltops, beyond the lights of the city. I can smell frankincense and myrrh, even in this mile-high minarette.” She looked to the man, and Kréc shivered to meet her gaze. “And burning flesh.”
Kréc swallowed. “Sorcerers, apostates.”
“Still human,” said the girl, softly. Her fingertips slipped from the bars.
“There’s a parade, down there,” she said, smiling thinly. “I imagine it’s for you.”
Kréc looked mildly affronted. “It is for the Lord Aveth. Her second coming is the reason for my errand, greater than all of us. Didn’t you attend the procession?”
“No,” said the girl. She ran a finger down a steel bar. Its image floated in the cloudy, ancient glass behind. “I do not leave this tower. “It’s,” she paused. “A long way down.”
Far below, the sound of drums, boots, and cheering were a distant roar. Kréc watched the girl, saw her face reflected in the glass as she looked down at the world, judging.
“Do you think…” she said, hugging her knees. “That Aveth fears what her race have wrought?”
The knight looked at her, horror smearing his face. “Such an idea is blasphemy. The Lord is fearsome, not fearful. All of faithful humanity knows that her eyes follow them, judging.”
“Perhaps,” said the girl with the green eyes. “She’s no longer the Lord you all knew.”
Kréc shifted, dropped from the sill. His steel plates clattered, glittered in the pale beam of light. He looked to the neophyte, face twisted in concern.
“Who are you to say such things? You speak as if you do not even hold the faith,” said Kréc. “As a soldier of the Lord, I would clap you in irons for speaking such words,” he said, voice breaking. “Yet I would not, cannot. I feel as if I have known you, of old.”
Slowly, she slipped from her perch, bare feet pattering on the marble floor. In the light, she was luminescent. Straightened, she was somehow greater than the knight. Her hair was black and luminous. Her eyes flashing garnets. He cowed under her gaze.
“You have known me, Sir Knight,” said she, taking Kréc’s steel-clad hand.
“Since the day you learned to pray.”
Breadcrumbs landed on the garden lawn among cooing, appreciative doves. They milled about the black, pointed shoes of a thin woman, whose sunhat so surpassed her in width that she resembled an umbrella. She stood amid rows of cypress trees, fed birds from a paper sack
Past league-long rows of skinny conifers loomed Palatine Chapel, its titanic spires superimposed against the clear, hot sky. The lilt of a faraway choir floated over the grass. Beyond that, even grander, loomed an ivory minaret. Colossal, many-arched, its pinnacle lost in a haze of heat and sun.
Another shadow crept over the green, came to rest beside the first. The woman in the wide hat glanced to it, tossed another handful of breadcrumbs. Beside her, the second shadow, a grey-haired man in a vicar’s suit, cleared his throat nervously.
“The doves in Sorelle sing sweeter,” he said.
The woman glanced at him. “But the birds of Botandale are best.”
At this, the man nodded, smiled slightly. “Good day, Master Dime.”
“Good day, Shapiro.”
“Are we well alone?” asked Shapiro.
“Yes. This park is deserted during Sorensday services. I’ve scouted it for two months,” said Dime. She grasped a handful from the crinkling bag, threw it. The doves skittered excitedly to the fallen crumbs.
“Good,” nodded Shapiro. “I must say, your Alagóran is excellent, for a Firl. Have you been in Carro long?”
“Since a year before Parousia.”
“You fell right into this assignment, then,” said the vicar, shaking his head.
“Indeed. What have you gleaned, regarding our subject?”
“Here,” said Shapiro, extending his hand. Dime proffered the bag of crumbs. The man took it in both hands, folded something into her palm: A rolled, wax cylinder. “Everything I’ve found since the shrove parade.” he said. “The rumors have shown some truth.”
Shapiro gazed up at the distant spire, squinted against the sun. “I acquired a builder’s plan for the tower. It was labeled for burning. Dated a month after she was recognized by the Court. Full refurbishment and restoration of the upper suite; installation of a pulley system; addition of hidden guard catwalks to the superstructure; among other things.”
“Any mention of cost? How much of the Prince’s treasury did they sink into that?” said Dime, tipping her head as well. The broad sunhat shed a band of shade over her eyes.
“None. Would you spare any expense, for your Lord?” asked Shapiro.
“I have no such thing, Vicar,” said the woman.
“True,” grimaced the man. “Though I never thought I would say such a thing, I think I now come to understand the Firlish mindset.”
“How so?” said Dime, squinting at him. The vicar was silent for a time. He produced a floral kerchief, dabbed sweat from his grey hairline.
“I have served the Church for longer than you have lived,” he said, finally. “I have prayed to Aveth for decades, happy in her silence.” He shut his eyes, listened to the faraway choir. “Now, she has returned. My faith should be stronger than ever. Instead, I pray no more.” Dime studied his face, watched the crow’s feet deepen on his skin.
“While others worship, I pass secrets to Firlish spies, but I hold no shame.” The vicar opened his eyes. “In those notes,” he said, pointing with a wobbling hand. “There is a guards’ record from the tower.”
He swallowed dryly. “Last month: Five escape attempts. They’ve installed bars on the upper windows. My Lord is a prisoner. She does not speak to me. She is no more powerful than you or I.”
Far off, the choir hit a soaring high note, faded. Doves warbled softly at the old man’s feet. “That, Master Dime, is why I understand you.”
“I’m sorry,” said Dime. Shapiro met her eye, smiled sadly.
“The service is ending,” said the old vicar, softly, proffering the spy her sack of crumbs. “Until next we meet.”
The doves fluttered, flew with the vicar’s departing shadow.
Parousia
Just two years ago, the Lord herself returned to the world.
Her followers rejoiced, prayed with greater surety. Her Church welcomed a golden age, hailed the event as righteous validation of faith. Her Northern skeptics sneered, decried a hoax of epic proportions.
Up and down the Coast, folk flock to the Avethan faith, heartened by the ancient religion’s renewed legitimization. Peasants, hopeful, clasp dirty palms in hesitant prayer. Common folk, curious, attend mass, fill their heads with the catching power of frankincense and chanted psalms. Monarchs, inspired by the pious High Prince of Alagór, offer their ringed hands to the Lord. Everywhere, cautious souls raise prayers to Aveth, hopeful she might hear.
Aveth
Aveth is the chief religion of Alagór and its surrounding states. * It is a monotheistic, humanocentric faith defined by its followers’ recognition of a merciful, all-knowing, unique being known eponymously as Aveth.
Avethans believe their Lord lives on high, observing, judging, and influencing human lives. She is known as a merciful, just, sisterly figure to all of humankind. ** She is said to bestow fortune on those who live by her dictates and scorn those who do not. †
The Writ
The faithful know Aveth’s dictates by a book called the Lord’s Writ. This seven-hundred and seventy-seven page tome is regarded as the unaltered and final revelation of the Lord. †† Within these pages, the canon of Aveth and humanity’s origin is detailed. It is, as Avethans would have it, the story of the Coast and the World.
The opening of the Writ, known as Legionaries, describes, some 1,100 years ago, the time before Aveth’s birth: A dark age of the world, a time of war held between titanic powers. Fell serpents, giants, and transhuman sorcerers manufactured atrocities and combats of unthinkable scale, consuming uncounted millions of lives like easy chattel. In this time, in the final year of the second millennium, a girl was born to an unnamed slave. Only after gaining twenty years, a legion of followers, and a dozen serpents dead on her spear did the girl gain her holy name.
The charismatic Aveth gained followers and influence over a decades-long military campaign. Uncounted fiery, coiling serpents and titanic, steel-clad sorcerers, thought invincible, died on her star-headed spear. ‡ By a half-century’s end, she had built an empire for humanity.
Toward the middle portion of the Writ, in a section known as Reigndoms, the Lord succumbed to wounds sustained while slaying the serpent Murmillo. Her followers mourned for only a day, however, as the corpse of Aveth, lain in state, disappeared, leaving behind only her spear. This event was declared a miracle, however, for Aveth had prophesied that she would die in service to her people, that she would return again when needed most. Thus, worship of the Lord continued for a thousand years and beyond.
Dictates
Modern followers of Aveth ascribe to a set of dictates set forth by the Writ. These dictates command that a follower:
- Recognize Aveth as the one true Lord (to whom all are subservient;) and
- pray to Her, and only Her, that she might hear them (in weekly mass and daily prayer;) and
- recognize humanity as the sole, true people of the World; and
- finally, serve only humanity and the Church in their pursuits (charity and conquest.)
These tenets, broad as they are, vary in their interpretation depending on the presiding regional arm of the Church. Many Avethans give alms as part of their service to humanity. Others join the Alagórian military. Many hold one fact as truth: If the faithful uphold these dictates, they will be favored in the eyes of the Lord, and be granted Paradise after death. ‡‡
Conspiracies
Now, a thousand years after her death, the Lord has returned. By what means, few can guess. Popular opinion says the legendary and fearful Holy Inquisition, a force of secret police and assassins supposedly formed in ancient times by the deadly Lord herself, was responsible for carrying out the true details of her resurrection. §
When the Lord came to the capital of Alagór in the company of an Inquisitorial army, many expected the High Prince to abdicate his throne, that the Lord might again rule her people. §§
Instead, no such abdication occurred. It is said that the Lord met for an afternoon with the Prince, the Lord Inquisitor, and the heads of state and Church in the royal palace of Cair Elise.
The subject of this meeting is a matter of debate. Officially, the state says the Lord put a series of questions to these powerful figures, made a variety of benevolent orders, including the dissolution of the Inquisition and cessation of political aggression toward apostate states. She took the hands of the leaders of the land, ascended to Altamora to guide her subjects from on high as they ruled below. ‖ Rumor suggests otherwise.
Some months after the parousia, an interview with a notable Alagórian expatriate appeared in Emperoussin papers. The interviewee, formerly a high priest of Aveth, described the meeting at Cair Elise as a travesty. The Lord, described by the priest as no more than a willowy teenager, was aghast by state of the world, condemned the heads of the Church and Inquisition as liars.
The priest suggested two possibilities: Either Aveth is a unwilling prisoner, contained by corrupt leaders, or she is a willing cloister, terrified by her chosen people. Folk whisper these possibilities only in secret, fearing, even now, the lingering blades of the Inquisition.
Whatever the truth may be, these years are a golden age for Aveth. The faith prospers, draws new souls with every sunrise. Few (even atheist Firls) doubt the Lord’s return.
The people’s faith is strong, sound in the returned Aveth. Millions pray to the Lord on high. Few, however, ask whether She, in her mile-high spire, is the same woman who died a thousand years ago.
notes
I blew the “princess in the highest room of the tallest tower,” thing way out of proportion, in retrospect. Now she’s the Catholic church.
2 comments on “A Second Coming”
So, God is back, and she’s an atheist. That’s depressing. 😛
Adds a new meaning to “believe in yourself,” doesn’t it?